Unabridged Audiobook
The story was OK, but the writer needs editing—desperately. She uses 73 words when 15 would do. I was constantly frustrated by the interruption of the narrative as she supplied unnecessary asides, verbal imagery or a col-de-sac of detail. I understand style and whimsy, and enjoy them in a story, but they don’t depend on over-narration.
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