Unabridged Audiobook
very good stuff
Jez has a hero complex. He's great at world building, love the world he's created. But his characters and their development as individuals is super shallow. They are just support characters for the hero and there's no individualism. This wouldn't be unreadable, except the hero is an idiot. Every time Jez has a chance to make a smart, tactical decision for the dungeon; he makes the worst choice possible. Making it really hard to read the book at all. Also I hate authors who are incapable of writing in third person. Also just a sidenote, I don't need to hear every little detail of your sexual fantasies. Jez spent 15 minutes on one sex scene, it made me uncomfortable.
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