Unabridged Audiobook
Needs fine tuning, but excellent premise, world building, and for the most part, characters. Would benefit from a strong proofreader/editor. The wording gets repetitive at times.. The words 'resplendent' and 'humble' come to mind. They show up for the first time, and then are repeated 2 or 3 times in the next paragraph. A few times characters behave in a way that are incongruous enough to take you out of the flow of the story. Granted, it's a fantasy story, but the story and the way the characters react still needs to make sense within its own context. Don't get me wrong, still enjoyable, and interesting enough to keep me going through the series, but could be elevated to a whole other level with a little bit of polish.
I really like the story narrator he’s great! Love the story enough to buy the next in the series. Good job!
Can’t wait for the next book to be released.
Great!
Very enjoyable series
I'm really enjoying this series
great narator, great books
great book. awesome series
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