I absolutely adore this story. The characters are captivating and inviting, and by the end you'll be cheering for them. There's nothing wrong with the narrator's voice, although, I do wish they would've used a male for Lucas Blade's dialogue, it was fine. It sounds like the author wanted to use herself narrating the whole time which is okay, but I feel it would've been better with a gruff male voice with a hint of softness. Some portions were a little cheesy and the dialogue was a little a repetitive, but other than that no complaints. Anyways, quit reading the reviews and download the story already.
The main character is immature and annoying. The narrator chose a high pitched voice that sounds like nails on a chalk board.