The book had a good premise about the Templars, but a few things bothered me with the book. First, the LTC teaching at West Point who entered the Army in the 1970s would be retired by now. I don't know any 30-yr LTCs. Second, I think the author forgets the guy has an eye patch because there were two times when the author explained that Holiday was "keeping one eye on [X] and the other eye on [Y]". Third, the author portrays the lady, Peggy, as a ditz. Her character has experience as a global photographer, yet the author keeps her character shallow. She could have contributed more. Yes, I know the first 2 are little things…the last one really got annoying…but they make the book less than it could have been.