The story is great. Intonation and pauses are not well used by the narrator.

Valley girl narrator, almost as bad as the lady with ill fitting dentures narrating s mystery

Narrator was clear and did her best to accomplish the difficult accents. Probably better to find a British narrator

The narrator is a american girl in her 20's that talks in a american ascent with mumble no emotions or tone fluctuations voice. I could only endure 3 minutes before turning it off